Awesome melody! Though, it is a little repetitive, it still sounds great!
My suggestion would be more percussion and something to fill in the gaps. Maybe a string synth.
For percussion I'd suggest a closed hat and an open hat. Maybe a crash here and there.
Your welcome to send the FLP. file to me and maybe I can make some changes. I wouldn't post it or anything :P
Hey thanks alot for the review man!
There are plenty of crashes throughout the song, and I did try to add percussion in at the start, but it didnt sound right to me so i must of just deleted it and completely forgot about percussion haha!
Thanks alot for the tips man, every lil bit helps me!
Where do you get all those awesome trance/techno samples? They sound awesome!
Nexus 2.0 Look it up!
Thanks for reviewing Jnr1114!
The percussion was my favorite. I noticed in most of your songs, you have an awesome percussion sound. The choirs also sounded awesome. Almost like "Voices of Passion" from EWQL.
I recently bought EWQL Symphonic Orchestra but haven't been able to make anything because I did know I had to buy a 40$ ilok thingy with it. So know I have to wait longer!
Amazing work. Keep it up.
Hey Jnr, are you using the EWplay edition?
Are way to loud. Can't barely hear anything. . . Turn 'em way down.
hm...sounds fine to me...but i guess that's just me. perhaps your speakers are just up too loud or something. eh, whatever. thanks for the review i guess even though you didn't weigh in on anything positive.
This is awesome
Some is good shit.
What did you use to record? I can't get a good sound for metal. . .
Also, what about the drums?
I love it! All I would suggest is turn down that trance lead around 0:19 and 0:55 but that is it.
I am so sending this to all my friends :D
It is a bit loud isn't it... I found myself increasing the levels on almost all tracks for this song because I was having balancing issues :S lol,
Thanks for the review :D
Again, an awesome beat.
All your music is amazing.
Thanks again Jnr. Keep up the good work yourself. Send me a message when you post a song!
Thanks for your review :D
It was good until 0:36
The intro was good. But when it got to 0:35, it was a little weird. When it hit 1:15 it got better.
So some good, and some bad.
2.64 / 5.00 (+ 0.041)
Good but repetitive
Most new people are repetitive. A good idea is too move the notes a bit after 2 riff unless you wanna change the whole riff. Once it replays over 4 times, it bores the hell out of people.
I'd say the song could be about 2:30 if it wasn't repetitive. I like the drum beats. There cool. You got off the right foot on the first part. How it is plain then the drums come in. That is a decent way to start a song.
Nice job. 3/5
3.59 / 5.00 (- 0.41)
Again. . .Awesome!
Dude, your so good at trance. . . I love all your trance songs.
And you always get a good piano sound for using FL Keys. Or is that what you use?
My favorite part was at 1:36
Awesome job. it moves all over the place! SWEET.
3.68 / 5.00 (+ 0.032)
Thanks, yea, I like 1:36 too.
Yes I do just use FL Keys for piano but with 3 or 4 added effects.
Glad you like it.
Thanks for reviewing! :D
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