Jnr1114's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[the zombie gathering]

Hm. . .

At 00:05 it started with minors. But at the first part you had majors. They don't go together. It is very simple and pretty boring. . . No real surge to it. And at 1:04 again, you used minors.

3 because the first melody was cool.

Current Score
2.09 / 5.00 (+ 0.076)

djdropshot responds:

thanks for the input i kinda felt it didnt flow right but this helps for mt next attempt

[TheRush]

Eh. . .

It's kinda sloppy. . . At 0:19 it would sound OK if it were recorder with real instruments. Along with the rest.

I can record it with my guitar and send it back to you and you can take most of the credit for it.

-JNR

[The last of the mohicans]

Symbols. . .

The symbols near the first part kind of ruined it. . .
At like 1:15 it gets really good.
I liked it. Better then most of mine.
Current Score
3.99 / 5.00 (+ 0.00038)

[Blazing Lights]

The first part is. . .

Way to repetitive.
But it some cool riffs.

hpbryan responds:

Haha alright thanks for your opinion! :D I'll try to have more creativity with my music.

[Destined As One]

Good song, bad repetitive

WAY to repetitive. It bores the hell out of people. The song doesn't need to be 6 minutes long. This song should only be like 3 minutes long.
Other then that, good sounds.

PestilenceOnce responds:

Alright maybe one day ill come back to this and shorten all the instruments. :)

[Long Way Home [RNG]]

Nice work!

Good sounds and such. But the first 1:40 of it was way to repetitive. You could have at least put a lead or something. The beat was the same thing over and over.

Other then that, awesome job, dude. Way better then I could do. Just make the song move around a bit more. It would make all the differents.
4/5 for good rhythm.
Current Score
4.75 / 5.00 (- 0.25)

Sirdangolot5 responds:

I'm glad you liked it! Check back for more tunes!

I was sort of going for more of a Deadmau5 style buildup/breakdown, and his are pretty repetitive at times, so I figured that I'd be less ambitious with this one. I don't know.

[Noises [BxR]]

I think it would be awesome if. . .

If there was a silence at 0:27 for 2 seconds then the same rhythm would start again except more louder and more drums. Then the Piano part after that.
It's just the song is to quiet the whole time. Not it is bad, just because this song doesn't really suit a full continues low level.

I know how it feels when someone comments and gives you suggestions. You think "Can it be any better?" or like "That would sound dumb".
I found that suggestions really improves things. The song only seems good to the user that made the song, but that is because HE made it.

Nice job, though. I love the rhythms.

[11eleven]

Nice

Nice job. Good sound.
Current Score
4.01 / 5.00 (- 0.00071)

[Satin's Stains]

A few flaws

First of all, the lead on the first part was off. It got better at 0:27. It might have been the delay on it, I don't know. Also the lead is way to loud on the whole song. Second, the drums are WAY off. They don't even match. At all. But I like the guitar sound you got there. Nice echoing. Nice little rhythm to.
It just needs some patching up.

Nice work.
-JNR

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Ah, thanks. =)

I'll take all this into account.

[Closed doors and burnt bridges]

Better

This is a lot better then your new submission. No offence at all, though.
This one sounds more professional.

Nitrocore responds:

Thanks for the review!, none taken, I kind of agree with you on that, my stuffs a little bit hit and miss.