Jnr1114's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Revelation]

Pretty cool

It's a little snappy. Like at 0:16 you'll notice an "all of a sudden" riff. It needs more of a fade in. 0:48 stops way to soon. Needs a fade out and some notes need to be replaced.

Let me know how the full version comes out.

-JNR

RayJones321 responds:

Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it. As for some of the notes needing to be replaced, I get where you're getting that from even as I made it some of the notes sounded odd, but I didn't know what to do with them. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you were honest without being to harsh or too light. Thanks again.

-JR-Sayer-

[Egyptian Temple]

Hm. . .

It need some percussion. A nice quit bell dinging maybe every 5-10 seconds. It's a little quiet. . . I think it might be worth working on.

CarlTheVoiceactor responds:

I like the percussion idea! I found a perfect instrument for that and implemented it into my full version which is now uploaded. Thanks for the idea and the review! :D

[Gerudo Valley [HQ]]

Another Good Zelda Piece!

LoZ have always had good music. You did a nice job and I like it.
What VSTi's did you use? I am really curious.

-JNR

[Technological Jazz finalcrapft]

Great!

I think it's great! Don't understand why it's only at 2.50
The guitar was cool. What did you use for it?

lidlurch responds:

haha, well, the reason it's not the greatest thing (i forgot to put this in the description) and that it's not getting that great of scores is because i used so many loops from garage band. but thanks for the review! Guitars: loops :p

[Forever Forgotten]

Some things. . .

What your doing is overlaying drums and new instruments. You keep that one beat going for a long time, and all you do is overlay more instruments. You need to make a whole new riff/melody after a minute or people will hate it. You gotta keep people interested. You spent 2:30 minutes on the same thing then it changed. You need a change every 30-1:00. This song should only be 2 minutes. Instead, you made it really boring. Other then that, I liked the beat, noise and the melodys. You just need new ones.
Good job for starting out. Everyone who starts out has this problem, repetitive songs.

Try something new, shorter with more melodys.

3/5 for the cool riffs.

-JNR

caleb392 responds:

TY, and xJinxyx sooo much. thats the kind of help i needed thank you.

[Saria's Song...with Cake]

Hahaha

Neat little piece. I think Saria's Melody should be a different instrument. But that is just opinion.

Why with cake? Lol. Seems like all your songs have Cake. You like cake?

balloonpoop responds:

hey thanks for the input! i am glad you liked it too. but the thing with cake is that my artist name is actually Some Guy with Cake.. not balloonpoop, thats just my user name lol

[From Russia with Cake]

Oh yeah!

I loveee it!
I think it was a little repetitive, but if it was cut down to around 3-5 minutes, it would fix that.
I love the intro, gives a sign of excitement.
Anyways, let me know if you revise it!

4/5

balloonpoop responds:

Hey I am glad you liked it and thank you for your input I think i will follow your advice too. I will for sure post a revision sometime in the future. thanks!

[Halcyon Lights]

Cool!

I thought it was great. Let me know when you finish it.
It could use more bass on the rhythm. Add a bass booster.

thatguy669606 responds:

sweet thanks for the kind words. I'll def up the bass on the final.

[Hexade]

Cool!

I liked it. It got a little overloading. Bass was coming in and started to make my speakers vibrate until around 1:30. Then at 2:03, it started again.

I like the idea, riffs and rhythm are great! Just needs work.
Let me know if you plan on updating this. I'm guessing you used FL Studio?
Anyways, nice start.

-JNR

3/5 but I'll give you 4/5 'cause I feel like it :D

Lammon responds:

will do, and yeah fl studio 9 with mostly nexus, some sytrus, some smaller free vsts

[Notation of Rotation]

Good but. . .

Way to many flats/minors. Your making a "happy" sounding sounding rythem with a "scary" solo tone. They don't go together.

3/5

Lomeinis responds:

An interesting statement, truly. I never would have thought of it. Thanks for the input.