Jnr1114's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Long Way Home [RNG]]

Nice work!

Good sounds and such. But the first 1:40 of it was way to repetitive. You could have at least put a lead or something. The beat was the same thing over and over.

Other then that, awesome job, dude. Way better then I could do. Just make the song move around a bit more. It would make all the differents.
4/5 for good rhythm.
Current Score
4.75 / 5.00 (- 0.25)

Sirdangolot5 responds:

I'm glad you liked it! Check back for more tunes!

I was sort of going for more of a Deadmau5 style buildup/breakdown, and his are pretty repetitive at times, so I figured that I'd be less ambitious with this one. I don't know.

[Satin's Stains]

A few flaws

First of all, the lead on the first part was off. It got better at 0:27. It might have been the delay on it, I don't know. Also the lead is way to loud on the whole song. Second, the drums are WAY off. They don't even match. At all. But I like the guitar sound you got there. Nice echoing. Nice little rhythm to.
It just needs some patching up.

Nice work.
-JNR

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Ah, thanks. =)

I'll take all this into account.

[Closed doors and burnt bridges]

Better

This is a lot better then your new submission. No offence at all, though.
This one sounds more professional.

Nitrocore responds:

Thanks for the review!, none taken, I kind of agree with you on that, my stuffs a little bit hit and miss.

[SPI - 003]

Needs Bass and Percussion

I'll give it an 8 for good riffs and melodys. But it would be 5 times better with a bass line and percussion drums.

Spiderette93 responds:

I agree, I'm still learning how to use the program and stuff. But when I do, I'll probably redo the song with a better beat

[PSB - Just Another Chance]

Nice job

Not really my style of music but awesome job!
4/5

PedroPSBro responds:

glad you like ^^

[-DF- Dulcis Amor]

Good Rhythm

I would be better if it were betterly recorded. And maybe some quiet violin or something.

Nice work.

DivineFlame responds:

I wish I could. So far I've only been working through the Finale program on university computers so I'm not able to do much yet. But thanks for the suggestion! When I get better equipment then I will try that!

[[S] Greg]

LOL

9 Because it is funny.
You need to yell louder, it sounds like your in a bedroom with some people sleeping.
Yell! :)

Screch responds:

It's because I would record late at night. Lol

[[S] Fewg]

Percussion. . .

There isn't no percussion. It sounds like someone just practicing :P
You need a good beat in there.

Screch responds:

It's a fugue sonata so it's solo piano. It probably sounds like "someone just practicing" because it's just one simple line of music being repeated and integrated within the rest of the song. It was a piece I just did for practice.

[PrTr: 03 Artine's Stars]

Amazing!

Talent dude. You got talent. I wish I could sound that good. It amazing! If i made something like that, i would listen to it everyday lol.

AWSEOME!!!!

-jnr

EvilRaccoon responds:

Thanks :D Much appreciated!

[Square Eyes]

Lol

It's cool. It brings back the memory's of the gameboys. Makes me laugh :D

Shellac responds:

It makes me realise how much time I spent playing games and not being productive when I was little... Or maybe all that gaming was just musical research!! Glad you liked it.