Jnr1114's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Building]

Nice

It's nice. The bell is a little loud. The piano is awesome. Is it real? If not, you did a great job on the velocity. Drums and flute are cool too.

4/5

ChrisisD responds:

The piano is one of my samples ;-) It's a sampled Yamaha piano, which is awesome. Thanks for the review ;-)
Greets, Chris

[Revelation full]

A little Dull

I love the idea. It just needs some work. The melody is used to often. I think the bell sound should be a piano and while the strings come in, the bells should come in.

What program did you use? PM me back and let me know :)

RayJones321 responds:

I used FL Studio.
Good suggestions by the way, I may incorporate them in th next (if there is one) version.

[-XtK- Day One]

Love it!

I love it! A lot of people here have talent, you're one of them. It's very professional.
I don't care what people say, this song deserve some credit. If anyone votes under 4, people don't understand real music :)
Keep it up, let me know if you make another.

-JNR

XotiK responds:

thanks, and I will I have a lot of songs under the process of being mastered or remastered so I will be sure to let you know.

[Gritty]

The Song Doesn't deserve to be that long. . .

Wayyy to repetitive. The song should be cut to 2-3 minutes. Nice beat, nice instruments. But it replays the same thing for a long time and that bores people. The idea in music is to get other people interested. See, you know what is coming next, what riff. They don't. They go "Oh, it's the same thing over and over" so they just vote you down.
So maybe have the riffs only play 2 times instead of 4-6 times.
Hope it helps.

-JNR

Namegoeshere responds:

Haha, I didn't realize it was so long. I kinda got lost in the making of it, but thanks anyway.

[The Scent Of Midnight]

Eh. . .

This would have been a very nice song with some different instruments. 1:03 or so, the piano has a delay that is sort of annoying. I think you might get some positive feedback if the instruments were different.

What program did you use?

TheElementalProdigy responds:

well...
Believe It Or Not But Everything I've Made Is On The FL9 Demo
So I Use What I Can Get
y'know?
thanx though

[Revelation]

Pretty cool

It's a little snappy. Like at 0:16 you'll notice an "all of a sudden" riff. It needs more of a fade in. 0:48 stops way to soon. Needs a fade out and some notes need to be replaced.

Let me know how the full version comes out.

-JNR

RayJones321 responds:

Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it. As for some of the notes needing to be replaced, I get where you're getting that from even as I made it some of the notes sounded odd, but I didn't know what to do with them. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you were honest without being to harsh or too light. Thanks again.

-JR-Sayer-

[Egyptian Temple]

Hm. . .

It need some percussion. A nice quit bell dinging maybe every 5-10 seconds. It's a little quiet. . . I think it might be worth working on.

CarlTheVoiceactor responds:

I like the percussion idea! I found a perfect instrument for that and implemented it into my full version which is now uploaded. Thanks for the idea and the review! :D

[Technological Jazz finalcrapft]

Great!

I think it's great! Don't understand why it's only at 2.50
The guitar was cool. What did you use for it?

lidlurch responds:

haha, well, the reason it's not the greatest thing (i forgot to put this in the description) and that it's not getting that great of scores is because i used so many loops from garage band. but thanks for the review! Guitars: loops :p

[Forever Forgotten]

Some things. . .

What your doing is overlaying drums and new instruments. You keep that one beat going for a long time, and all you do is overlay more instruments. You need to make a whole new riff/melody after a minute or people will hate it. You gotta keep people interested. You spent 2:30 minutes on the same thing then it changed. You need a change every 30-1:00. This song should only be 2 minutes. Instead, you made it really boring. Other then that, I liked the beat, noise and the melodys. You just need new ones.
Good job for starting out. Everyone who starts out has this problem, repetitive songs.

Try something new, shorter with more melodys.

3/5 for the cool riffs.

-JNR

caleb392 responds:

TY, and xJinxyx sooo much. thats the kind of help i needed thank you.